'WOW' Writing

Yesterday we wrote about the thunder storm.  We are learning about different ways we can make our writing interesting for the reader.  We used words like flashes, cracking and rumble to describe the thunder and lightning.  We had lots of 'WOW' work!

"The thunder and hail was loud!" - Wereta

"I liked the thunder and flashes!" - Liam

"Bang! The lightning is cracking. Electric lightning." - Billy

"Crack went the thunder." - Douglas

"Loud rain and hail falling from the clouds" - Lachlan